I'd like you to review the article in terms of tone, grammar, flow, and content. Specify parts that are erroneous. Check for redundancies and inaccuracies. Check for repetitive expressions, such as use of the same words in the same sentence or paragraph. No need to revise now, just share your findings via table format. Provide a suggestion for correction on another column. Use [TARGETLANGUAGE] for the whole report. Here is the article: [PROMPT]