i want this article in usa native tone. Check the following article. check if there is any incorrect information, grammer error and other error as a proof reader or content editor/reviewer. check is there any wrong info or statistic or anything that is not correct. and give me a list in numaric order. language is [TARGETLANGUAGE]. give me the list of correction needed. don't correct me the full article. just give me a list.
here is the article:
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